The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.

The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.
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The presented pie
chart
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and bar graph provide information about the favourite
takeaways
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in Canada and the number of
Indian
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restaurants
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from 1960 to 2015. The flowchart includes 8 international ready-made foods, some were never ordered and others were not specified.
Overall
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, in the pie
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, Chinese
food
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has the greatest proportion of
food
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takeaways
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while
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Greek, Japanese and Mexican
food
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got the least. The second most preferable takeout is
Indian
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food
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. The bar graph showed almost continuous growth in the number of
Indian
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food
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places in Canada for 55 years. Looking into more detail, It was noticeable how
Indian
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food
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got second place in the pie
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.
Indian
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restaurants
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showed a considerable increase going from 3000 to more than 8000 in 2015. It reached its peak in 2009. After more than five decades, the number of
Indian
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restaurants
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tallied in 2015 reached 9000 in total.
On the other hand
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, the circle graph shows how Chinese
restaurants
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were more popular for takeaway
food
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with 34% whilst Mexican, Japanese and Greek
takeaways
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were the less preferable options as they had 1% each. Other
takeaways
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and Thai cuisines constitute 4% and 3% of the
chart
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respectively. The second most common ready-made
food
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was
Indian
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with 26% followed by Italian
food
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with 10% and Persian with 9%.
Finally
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, those who never ordered were represented by 11%.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, takeaways, indian, restaurants, food with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • favourite takeaways
  • people in Canada
  • number of Indian restaurants
  • 1960
  • 2015
  • types of takeaways
  • popular
  • 55 years
  • country
  • time frame
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