The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph depicts the information about the

number

of men and women studied in the

canadian

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Canadian

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universities during the

year

from 1992 to 2006 .

Overall

,

large

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number

of females joined

graduation

courses

comparied

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compared

to male

canidates

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candidates

. Looking at the graph in detail, during the

year

1992,almost 70000males joined

graduation

courses

but

the

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in the

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same

year

near to

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nearly

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100000

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100,000

female

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females

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joined

in

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apply

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the same course.

Moreover

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after two

years

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the

number

of graduates

were

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dsropped

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dropped

down to the students

joined

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who joined

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at

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in

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the

the

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intial

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initial

year

.

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in the

year

1998

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the

number

of graduates

in

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of

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both gender

are constantly joined

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have constantly joined

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the

courses

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was

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accounted

to

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72000and 102000 respectively

Furthermore

,a decade ago, the

number

of female graduates

slightly

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was slightly

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upward to 110000.

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the same

year

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male

canidates

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candidates

also

increased to 80000.During the

year

2004

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,2004

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almost10000

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almost

male

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all male

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students

take

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took

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admissions in

graduation

courses

.

At

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the final

year

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the

number

of female

canidates

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candidates

reach

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reached

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the

peakpoint

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peak point

breakpoint

in the

graduation

courses

and that

was

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accounted

to

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150000.