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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph depicts the information about the
number
 of men and women studied in the
canadian
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Canadian
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 universities during the
year
 from 1992 to 2006 .
Overall
,
large
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a large
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number
 of females joined
graduation
courses
comparied
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compared
 to male
canidates
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candidates
. Looking at the graph in detail, during the
year
 1992,almost 70000males joined
graduation
courses
 but
the
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in the
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 same
year
near to
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nearly
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100000
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100,000
female
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females
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 joined
in
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apply
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the same course.
Moreover
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,Moreover
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 after two
years
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,years
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 the
number
 of graduates
were
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dsropped
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dropped
 down to the students
joined
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who joined
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at
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in
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 the
the
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apply
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intial
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initial
year
.
Besides
 in the
year
1998
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,1998
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 the
number
 of graduates
in
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of
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 both gender
are constantly joined
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have constantly joined
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 the
courses
 and that
was
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apply
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accounted
to
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for
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 72000and 102000 respectively
Furthermore
,a decade ago, the
number
 of female graduates
slightly
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was slightly
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 upward to 110000.
At
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In
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 the same
year
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,year
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 male
canidates
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candidates
also
 increased to 80000.During the
year
2004
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,2004
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almost10000
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almost
male
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all male
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 students
take
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took
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 admissions in
graduation
courses
.
At
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In
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 the final
year
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,year
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 the
number
 of female
canidates
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candidates
reach
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reached
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 the
peakpoint
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peak point
breakpoint
 in the
graduation
courses
 and that
was
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apply
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accounted
to
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for
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 150000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, year, graduation, courses with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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