What distinguishes young people from their parents' or grandparents' generation is a lack of physical exercise. Today's generation are spending far too long playing computer games, chatting aimlessly on social networking sites or simply watching TV, and too little time being active. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Being constantly active and involving oneself in physical exercise is a hot topic nowadays. It is the opinion of others that young people are more immersed in playing online games, browsing social networking sites, and getting less active compared to their older generation. In
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Teenagers now are observed to spend more time on passive activities because they are more convenient and require minimal use of their physical energy. After school hours, young individuals may immediately open their computers and start to engage with computer games. They are less likely to go biking or do simple workouts at home to improve their body’s physical state. Linking Words
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of doing household chores on weekends, teens prefer to lie on their bed and have the time of their lives.
When the pandemic hit two years ago, these behaviours were more evident among young people because they were stuck at home. They get bored more easily and Linking Words
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differs them from their parents and grandparents who would participate in simple active things to keep themselves busy. Linking Words
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, my grandparents are fond of walking in the park to catch a glimpse of beautiful scenery. They are less interested in utilizing phones or exploring random things found on the internet.
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To sum up
, I agree that the young generation at the present time is less likely to be involved in active exercise and will preferably play games online or check their social media throughout the day. Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite