the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The shown maps describe a planned development in the future of an industrial

area

in the town of Norbiton.

Overall

, the industrial after

renovating

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renovation

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will be added more features and all the factories will be demolished to make

place

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a place

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for housing. As we can see in the first map, there are only 2 ways to get to the

center

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centre

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of the industrial

area

which after

renovating

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renovation

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will get add 2 more ways, so in total of 4. The present

area

has factories along

sides

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the sides

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to the path

led

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leading

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to the

center

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centre

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, the factories later will be demolished to make

ways

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way

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for housing and services.

According to

the second map, the farmland will be moved to the East from where it is now and the farmland will still at the North of the river. More services will be added

such

as

:

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apply

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shops, medical

centre

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centres

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,

playground

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playgrounds

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,

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and school

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school

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schools

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which were surrounded by houses.

In addition

, the renovated

area

will be

fill

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filled

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up fully not

seperate

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separate

like it is right now.