The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
The given graph illustrates the
number
of Caribbean
island
visitors and
also
provides information about whether they stayed on
cruise
ships
or stayed on the
island
between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
, the
number
of tourists rose steadily through these 8
years
.
Moreover
, at
first,
the
number
of people who preferred to stay on
cruise
ships
was less than the ones who decided to stay on the
island
however
, accommodating on the
island
was more popular in the
last
3 reported
years
.
According to
the graph, in 2010, 1
million
tourists travelled to
this
Caribbean
island
. For the next 4
years
, the
number
of visitors had increased to 2.5
million
and it experienced a sharp growth to 3.5
million
in 2017. In 2010, about 75% of tourists would rathered stay on the
island
and just a quarter of them were accommodated on a
cruise
. Until 2015, visitors preferring to stay on the
island
was more than the
number
of the ones who wanted to stay on
cruise
ships
whilst they increased more significantly in these
years
and in 2016 they were bigger than the others and in 2017 2
million
people stayed on
ships
compared to 1.5
million
on the other ones.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, cruise, ships, years, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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