The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
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The given graph illustrates the
number
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of Caribbean
island
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visitors and
also
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provides information about whether they stayed on
cruise
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ships
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or stayed on the
island
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between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
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, the
number
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of tourists rose steadily through these 8
years
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.
Moreover
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, at
first,
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the
number
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of people who preferred to stay on
cruise
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ships
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was less than the ones who decided to stay on the
island
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however
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, accommodating on the
island
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was more popular in the
last
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3 reported
years
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.
According to
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the graph, in 2010, 1
million
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tourists travelled to
this
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Caribbean
island
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. For the next 4
years
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, the
number
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of visitors had increased to 2.5
million
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and it experienced a sharp growth to 3.5
million
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in 2017. In 2010, about 75% of tourists would rathered stay on the
island
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and just a quarter of them were accommodated on a
cruise
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. Until 2015, visitors preferring to stay on the
island
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was more than the
number
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of the ones who wanted to stay on
cruise
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ships
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whilst they increased more significantly in these
years
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and in 2016 they were bigger than the others and in 2017 2
million
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people stayed on
ships
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compared to 1.5
million
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on the other ones.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, cruise, ships, years, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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