The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use
The diagram illustrates the process by which solar panels can be installed to produce
electricity
for households.
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Overall
, Linking Words
this
is a linear process with five steps. It starts with absorbing the light and ends with the production of Linking Words
electricity
.
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First,
solar panels have to be installed on the rooftop to be able to absorb energy from the sun and turn it to DC current. In the second step, an inventor is placed on the wall near the roof to convert DC current to AC current. Linking Words
This
inventor controls the production of Linking Words
electricity
. Use synonyms
Thirdly
, an electrical panel is connected to the inverter via a wire. In Linking Words
this
stage, Linking Words
electricity
is distributed to the home by Use synonyms
this
panel.
In step five, any excess Linking Words
electricity
will flow back to the nearest gird through the meter in order to be stored for the latter time. Use synonyms
Finally
, if the amount of Linking Words
electricity
exceeds the amount of production, the stored Use synonyms
electricity
from the grid flows back to the home through the electrical panel.Use synonyms
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