The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use

The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use
The diagram illustrates the process by which solar panels can be installed to produce
electricity
for households.
Overall
,
this
is a linear process with five steps. It starts with absorbing the light and ends with the production of
electricity
.
First,
solar panels have to be installed on the rooftop to be able to absorb energy from the sun and turn it to DC current. In the second step, an inventor is placed on the wall near the roof to convert DC current to AC current.
This
inventor controls the production of
electricity
.
Thirdly
, an electrical panel is connected to the inverter via a wire. In
this
stage,
electricity
is distributed to the home by
this
panel. In step five, any excess
electricity
will flow back to the nearest gird through the meter in order to be stored for the latter time.
Finally
, if the amount of
electricity
exceeds the amount of production, the stored
electricity
from the grid flows back to the home through the electrical panel.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Direct Current (DC)
  • Alternating Current (AC)
  • Inverter
  • Electric panel
  • Utility meter
  • Electric grid
  • Energy storage
  • Renewable energy
  • Sustainable
  • Excess electricity
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