The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart displays the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. The below data is given in millions for about three years.
In the year 2007, there was less than $25000 was 25, $25000-$49999 it was 27, $50000-$74999 it was around 21, $75000-$99999 it was nearby 14 and $1000000 and more it was around 30. In the year 2011, less than $25000
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was 29, $25000-$49999 it was 30, $50000-$74999 it was 23, $75000-$99999 it was 14 and $1000000 or more it was 27. In the year 2015, less than $25000 Correct pronoun usage
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was 27, $25000-$49999 Correct pronoun usage
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was 28, $50000-$74999 Correct pronoun usage
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was 22, $75000-$99999 Correct pronoun usage
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was 15 and $1000000 or more was the highest Correct pronoun usage
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, there is a great difference between 2007, 2011 as well as
2015. The above information is on the household income in millions. The data is from the USA.Submitted by purvaam383 on
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