Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugars which cause many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that many businesses in the food and beverages industry use a lot of sugars in their
products
which results in various health risks. Due to
this
belief, many people
argue that the price
of sugary products
should be increased to discourage people
from consuming sugar
. While
there are some benefits to this
idea, I maintain the opinion that there should not be any adjustment to the price
.
On the one hand, the argument that sugary products
should cost more than usual is beneficial to some extent. This
action would immediately influence the mindset of consumers, especially those who are on a tight budget. Eventually, at a certain level, people
would consume less of this
substance. However
, this
practice would probably not be effective for those who are addicted to it, even if they are financially poor.
On the other hand
, there are two primary reasons why I also
believe that the price
of sugary products
should not be adjusted to be more expensive. Firstly
, sugar
is a necessary substance for the human body. If the price
of sweet-tasting food and beverages increases, the people
who cannot afford to buy costly products
will ultimately stop consuming sugar
. Consequently
, due to
the lack of this
substance, they would likely have certain health problems. Secondly
, most foods and drinks these days contain sugar
, and if the price
of these products
is made more expensive, people
will need to spend more money to purchase and ,eventually
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,eventually
this
action will cause inflation in the domestic economy.
In conclusion, although
increasing the price
of sugary products
presents certain advantages, I contend that it should not be encouraged to perform that action. It is advisable that businesses should acknowledge the health of the consumers by starting to reduce the amount of sugar
in their products
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