Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. Tp what extent do you agree with this view?

Some people are of the opinion monies channelled to the field of

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should be spent on other projects.I partly agree with

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. On the one hand, working in the

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industry is a career like any other field and they are expected to generate income to support their activities. The

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includes

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acting, music and dance.Their works are mostly displayed on our screens and

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to entertain many.

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patronage of their products by the public raises some funds somehow. Their works are

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commonly promoted on social media platforms

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so it is easier to generate interest in viewers.

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, these actors and musicians display very

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lifestyles on their media handles and I can understand those against

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funding for

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as they already show the world they live

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comfortable

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.

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,

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arts

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in

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museum

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museums

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and castles are

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where numerous people visit. Despite the numbers that go to see

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places

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, the fee charged is very little to encourage more visitors to troop there.

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makes it difficult to generate enough funds to pay the workers and even maintain

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places

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, I can relate to why some financial assistance from the

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will be helpful to them. Because

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these public

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hold a nation's history

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it is logical to be

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government

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responsibility to maintain those buildings and their

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to even attract more tourists.

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, I partially agree with the fact that

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finances should involve the

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industry and other fields