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You came to know about a piece of equipment that would help you at your workplace. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter – describe the equipment – explain how it might be useful at your workplace – offer help in purchasing it

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to buy a new colour
printer
 for the financial department. As we have only one
printer
 in the office which is capable of printing in black and white.
However
, it takes so long to print from one
printer
at the end
 of every month.
For instance
, we need a colour
printer
 as well to differentiate between financial graphs.
Last
 month, we found an error in the report of
last
 month and that took around 2 business days to fix , just because of the black and white print.
Therefore
, getting a new colour
printer
 would be more suitable for our work
as well as
 it is more efficient for our job.
Overall
, it brings a huge profit to our company save more and work fast.
Moreover
, I will take the total responsibility to buy it, as
i
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 live just 5 minutes walking distance from the biggest electronic store in
this
 city. I hope to hear from you soon, Preet.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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