In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. This only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passenger. Do you thik the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Actually, in my opinion,it's an advantage because it can be comfortable for everyone. Sometimes there are arguments with the driver and clients. Using cars without a driver is a way of avoiding these arguments.
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, some
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calm down when they are alone, and it can reduce their stress. It is the best choice for
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population. All of them were advantages of using a car driverless. In spite of these, it has disadvantages.
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, people mustn't forget that it can be dangerous over there. I can't believe that.
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, to my mind, how can
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absolutely trust robots? I know it is new and interesting for society. To be honest,
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may prevent drivers from getting a job in the future
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If an emergency situation arises, I don't think that robots will be able to get out of these situations like humans. Both of them can affect the lives of
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. Despite all
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, the existence of
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an invention is an indication of how far we have advanced in the field of technology.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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