Before a lot of advantages, some people believe that the internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this statement?

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, the net has become

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major necessity in everyone's life.

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came into the market, it was very difficult for humans to trust because it created a

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of problems at that

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but eventually

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Technology

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has

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evolved over the period of

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and I strongly believe that there were a

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of problems

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the beginning of the

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evolution. To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared.

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, at the beginning

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consumption 

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did not know how to

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because there was no knowledge or manual which

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help to

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the

internet

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, a survey

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the Times of India says that only 2% of

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the Indian

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population knew about the network.

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, there was

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lot

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of fraud and scams which

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the

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to go under the poverty line.

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lot

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of hatred towards the consumption of information

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servers

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. On the other side,

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created a

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of

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that the usage of

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internet

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the internet

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is not safe and the government is monitoring your data.

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, a very small amount of

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utilised the data.

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, the price of

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surfing online was very much high at the beginning of

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revolution .

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, cyber

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came to India in 2010 charging rupees 50 per hour which was very high at that

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percentage of

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had the facility of the web.

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,

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Internet

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the Internet

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was very

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hard to

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at that

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and as far as I am concerned there were

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lot

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of

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which led to

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use

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internet

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superhighway

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