The bar chart below gives information about average annual seafood consumption in Asian countries between 2002 and 2010.
The graph below illustrates the information on the trip length in the USA accomplished by children from 5 to 15 years old.
If we look at the amount of miles in 1970, it seems that cycling and bus travel were the most popular at
this
time, while
trips by taxi were the least place. After that
it fluctuated and reached Add a comma
,that
the
peak in Correct article usage
a
2000
year with 20 miles indicators.
There was a considerable rise in the usage of Change the article
the 2000
bus
, which rose from almost thirty miles Fix the agreement mistake
buses
length
to Change preposition
in length
fourty
. Walking travelling sharply dropped in 2000 year and gradually increased till 2020. Cars reached the peak at thirty Correct your spelling
forty
distant
respectively and Replace the word
distance
then
decreased. Train longitude fluctuated all over the time
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that there were considerable upward trends in the length of taxi and bus application,
Remove the comma
apply
while
walking as well as
cycling trips show the
downward trend.Correct article usage
a
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