A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, •explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday •describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words

#friend #holiday #first #time #summer #advice #•explain #•describe

Dear Annie, Hope you’re doing well. I’m writing

this

to give you advice about the camping holiday that you’re planning for

this

summer. Since you’re going there for the first time and you like thrillers a lot, I reckon you will definitely love camping in the hilly area. And, the best part of camping is feeling the silence of nature during the night, which I

also

admire a lot. It might become an uphill task for you at night because you may get scared by the animal and insect sounds. So try to not take a deep sleep in camp to keep yourself and others safe. Plus,you asked me to join you but I’ve some office stuff going on,

due to

which I’ll unable to make it. I think you should go on

this

trip and I'm sure, we’ll make another plan very soon for river-side camping. Hope you’ll enjoy

this

experience. Best Regards, Jaskaran

Submitted by KaranAwal15 on Fri Sep 15 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Improve your writing score in 2 weeks

Get 60% discount and enjoy a quick and easy way to check IELTS Writing Task 1&2!

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

Unlock the Full Potential of Writing9

Unlimited Essay Checks: Practice and perfect your skills.
Detailed Error Analysis: Spot every mistake.
In-Built Grammar Checker: Say no to grammatical errors.
Personalized Suggestions: Know how to boost your score.
Progress Tracking: View your checked essay history.
Still thinking? We have a 14-day money-back guarantee. Take a leap of faith!

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4
band
Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion
Bringing up children is becoming a difficult task day by day. Many parents proclaim that setting up children free for making their own daily living decisions will enhance selfish triat of their personality however others support the idea that it will help children to be self- determined and more confident. This essay will discuss how permitting children to make decisions on their own under supervision help them to outstand among others.
4.5
band
Some young people believe it’s best to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, while others wish to live in their hometowns their whole lives. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Most of the youth are likely to move out of their hometown on the completion of college, on the other hand, others feel comfortable in staying in their hometown till death. Both of them have their merits and demerits, as most of the small towns have limited access to good universities, while, leaving a hometown pressurises the one to leave their neighbours. In my opinion, leaving hometown for better opportunities is the better option rather than staying in the hometown with reduced opportunities.
7
band
Some people believe that there should be ﬁxed punishments for each crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some individuals think that criminals should be punished according to the law at the first time committed a crime, while others think that it should be considered on a purpose and situation of a crime before punishment in the case by case. In this following paragraph, both views of this topic will be outlined in detail before the conclusion is reached.
4
band
In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Recently, there has been much interest in gaining a better understanding of why children are frequently given the message that they can achieve anything if they make every effort. In this essay, I will profer the advantages and disadvantages of this message and give reasons for my answers with example from my own experience.
5.5
band
Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
Everyone wants to live in comfort. Some people find independent houses more convenient while others prefer modern-day apartments. I believe living in an apartment is more advantageous than living in a house for several reasons.

Check your essays right now

Premium membership for serious IELTS test takers. Join the ranks of our successful students!

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some young people believe it’s best to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, while others wish to live in their hometowns their whole lives. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?