A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, •explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday •describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words

Dear Annie, Hope you’re doing well. I’m writing
this
to give you advice about the camping holiday that you’re planning for
this
summer. Since you’re going there for the first time and you like thrillers a lot, I reckon you will definitely love camping in the hilly area. And, the best part of camping is feeling the silence of nature during the night, which I
also
admire a lot. It might become an uphill task for you at night because you may get scared by the animal and insect sounds. So try to not take a deep sleep in camp to keep yourself and others safe. Plus,you asked me to join you but I’ve some office stuff going on,
due to
which I’ll unable to make it. I think you should go on
this
trip and I'm sure, we’ll make another plan very soon for river-side camping. Hope you’ll enjoy
this
experience. Best Regards, Jaskaran
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