Some people believe that online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 40 mins

Some people argue that whether solely online reading tools or printed handout is suitable for learning
children
. In
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this
, which I'm going to explain. On the one hand, Using online material
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definitely
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cost
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of printing and indirectly
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save
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global warming. It is easier for information sharing between teachers and
children
. The most important part is that it can be adjusted anytime including before and after teaching.
In addition
to
this
,
children
can access
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the handouts more easily through
tablet
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or other devices.
However
, there are some drawbacks ,
such
as accessing through internet
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can lead to distraction to do something else on the internet.
For example
, some
children
spend their time scrolling down on social media applications,
while
reading online materials.
On the other hand
, Printed handouts can reduce eye
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from reading long. Since it is on
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paper, so there
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no other distractions like online one. Anyway, there are
also
some disadvantages
such
as
children
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to carry more handouts and that can be heavy for them.
Furthermore
, it uses more
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and more cost. In a nutshell, there are pros and cons
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ultilizing
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utilising
both materials. My suggestions are
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the media wisely.
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