Some people believe that online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 40 mins

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Some people argue that whether solely online reading tools or printed handout is suitable for learning

children

. In

this

essay, there are many reasons behind

this

, which I'm going to explain. On the one hand, Using online material

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apply

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definitely

reduce

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reduces

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cost

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the cost

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of printing and indirectly

help

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helps

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save

the

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apply

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global warming. It is easier for information sharing between teachers and

children

. The most important part is that it can be adjusted anytime including before and after teaching.

In addition

this

children

can access

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apply

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the handouts more easily through

tablet

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tablets

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or other devices.

However

, there are some drawbacks ,

such

as accessing through internet

device

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devices

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can lead to distraction to do something else on the internet.

For example

, some

children

spend their time scrolling down on social media applications,

while

reading online materials.

On the other hand

, Printed handouts can reduce eye

strains

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strain

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from reading long. Since it is on

the

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apply

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paper, so there

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are

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no other distractions like online one. Anyway, there are

also

some disadvantages

such

children

have

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having

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to carry more handouts and that can be heavy for them.

Furthermore

, it uses more

papers

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paper

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and more cost. In a nutshell, there are pros and cons

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ultilizing

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utilising

both materials. My suggestions are

choose

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to choose

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the media wisely.

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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9
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

209 words

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Some people believe that online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 40 mins

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

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