the bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories
The bar chart provides information about the average expenditure of four countries in various categories,
such
as food
, housing, transportation, health
care
, and clothing, in 2009.
Overall
, Except for Japan
, all countries spent the majority of their money on housing, while
clothing and health
care
were the least spent on
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Japan
, on the other side, had food
as its highest expense.
In the housing category, the United States
had the highest share out of the four nations, with about 27%, and Canada was the lowest spender with just over 20%. Meanwhile, food
was the top spending in Japan
, with an approximately 23% share, in contrast
to the United States
, with just under 15% worth of food
expenses. Transportation was the third rate in the United Kingdom and Japan
, with about 15% and 10%, respectively. However
, it was the second for the United States
and Canada, with roughly 18% and 20% shares, respectively.
The two other categories, such
as health
care
and clothing, saw lower portions compared to the three abovementioned. To illustrate, the United States
topped among four countries with a share of around 8% in health
care
, in contrast
to the United Kingdom with approximately 2%, which is the lowest in all of its expenditures. Canada and the United Kingdom spent almost 6% to 7% of their money on clothing, on the other hand
, the United States
and Japan
never went over 4%.Submitted by mjdf0930 on
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