the bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories
The bar chart provides information about the average expenditure of four countries in various categories,
such
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food
, housing, transportation, Use synonyms
health
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care
, and clothing, in 2009.
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Overall
, Except for Linking Words
Japan
, all countries spent the majority of their money on housing, Use synonyms
while
clothing and Linking Words
health
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care
were the least spentUse synonyms
on
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Japan
, on the other side, had Use synonyms
food
as its highest expense.
In the housing category, the United Use synonyms
States
had the highest share out of the four nations, with about 27%, and Canada was the lowest spender with just over 20%. Meanwhile, Use synonyms
food
was the top spending in Use synonyms
Japan
, with an approximately 23% share, Use synonyms
in contrast
to the United Linking Words
States
, with just under 15% worth of Use synonyms
food
expenses. Transportation was the third rate in the United Kingdom and Use synonyms
Japan
, with about 15% and 10%, respectively. Use synonyms
However
, it was the second for the United Linking Words
States
and Canada, with roughly 18% and 20% shares, respectively.
The two other categories, Use synonyms
such
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health
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care
and clothing, saw lower portions compared to the three abovementioned. To illustrate, the United Use synonyms
States
topped among four countries with a share of around 8% in Use synonyms
health
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care
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in contrast
to the United Kingdom with approximately 2%, which is the lowest in all of its expenditures. Canada and the United Kingdom spent almost 6% to 7% of their money on clothing, Linking Words
on the other hand
, the United Linking Words
States
and Use synonyms
Japan
never went over 4%.Use synonyms
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