some peoplebeilive that it is best to accept a bad situation, suchas an unsatisfactory job or shoratge of money, Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many argue that
one
should be satisfied with his current state and never think of any other possibly better
situation
. Others ,
however
, believe
one
should always try to find better solutions and keep improving until he reaches his goals. I believe both of these opinions are partially true, but I value the former more. To become an expert in solving a problem, you need to spend a lot of
time
dealing with that problem and so, putting enough
time
is necessary for a profession,
one
should try to progress at any
time
.
Otherwise
, humankind would never be able to progress so much.
Firstly
, practice makes perfect and indeed, practice takes
time
. In order to truly know everything about what you do, you need to study the technical literature and
also
, the historical events that took place around that subject.
Moreover
, you need to practically repeat the knowledge you've gained and all of
this
process
,
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requires a lot of dedication and
time
.
For instance
, to get an A in math,
one
needs to study the textbook carefully and
furthermore
, practice a lot of extra examples.
Hence
, if you find yourself in a tough
situation
, you might as well want to learn how to handle it
instead
of feeling desperate.
However
,
humans
never endured the same
situation
for a long
time
. Our dreams are usually all we need to keep living and we're never satisfied with anything less. So, working hard to achieve our dreams is in our nature and
that is
what has led to all of our discoveries and inventions.
For example
, ancient Romans found it hard to carry weight in a cart without wheels.
Consequently
, they went on to invent wheels which was a revolution in our history of innovations.
Thus
, experiencing a hard
time
was never an obstacle for
humans
.
Instead
, it has always been a motivation and fuel for us to keep going and reach the highest of highs.
To conclude
, tough situations have always
around
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humans
throughout history, we were backed down to allow them to stop us from advancing.
Although
before any breakthrough
humans
made, there were periods of not making any progress and dealing with the same problem, but, they were temporary and we always succeeded in improving no matter the
situation
. So, it is always necessary for
humans
to dream big and try to become a better version of themselves.
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