6.) Drug abuse is becoming a problem in our society. What are the causes of this and what are some solutions

said that
is going to be a huge
in the society caused by many reasons and the official is trying to find the solution for it to safe the public moral. First of all, it is undeniable that addictive materials are spreading around the world and became the
for a long time. Nowadays, it is already accessed to
in the local and the most concern is youths because they are a vulnerable person.
According to
the research,
in the young
especially in a minor is growing because the wrong value and trend among them.
For example
: The Mate amphetamine, cocaine, and other addictive items that were used in the TV drama which lead the minor to repeat that behavior. Meanwhile, in adults,
was used for entertaining and it seen to be more radical in the veteran group.
, the
need to be solved as soon as possible to safe the
and secure the city.
, The wrong value in the minor should be solved by campaigning and rising the awareness of the danger of it. In the same time, the social welfare should be provided to adult especially in venerable person who has a high risk to use. For the example: the homeless and veteran must be received the carrier training and budget support to start the new life for keeping them away from the narcotic.
, the protection was implement but the therapy for the addicted
importance because state need man to build, so that, the recovery program to bring them back to normally life is a key to complete as well. In conclusion,
may causes from many way but there are
the solutions which can be used to solve each
in both of the protection and prevention. In the other hand, the restoration is
the key to sustain the security of the state.
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