Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
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which
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across
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the
larger Correct article usage
a
manufacture
scale, so more Replace the word
manufacturing
multinational
relocate their Fix the agreement mistake
multinationals
factories
to developing countries to take advantage of lower costs. Despite minor ramifications Use synonyms
such
as detrimental effects on the environment and local health issues, Linking Words
this
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process
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considers
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is considered
as
positive step for both sides.
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a
this
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process
brings benefits for native persons in developing countries and multinational firms. The primary reason Use synonyms
promoting
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for promoting
this
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incentive
, which stems from Fix the agreement mistake
incentives
minimize
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minimising
assemble
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assembly
cost
and tax incentives in Fix the agreement mistake
costs
special
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the special
a special
offer
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offers
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be explain
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be explained
nation
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nations
large
young workforce Correct article usage
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nation
labour Change noun form
nation's
cost
are lower than Fix the agreement mistake
costs
average
price and Correct article usage
the average
couple
with special tax incentives Wrong verb form
coupled
as well as
favour policies to promote foreign direct investment cashflow. In Vietnam, where was chosen to build Linking Words
factories
by Use synonyms
Samsung
Industries, which ultimately resulted in the proliferation of speeding urbanization as farmers Use synonyms
abandon
traditional Wrong verb form
abandoned
job
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jobs
as
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and
move
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moved
factories
with better stable Use synonyms
paycheck
and adequate health insurance. Indeed, the financial statement of Fix the agreement mistake
paychecks
Samsung
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were
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monetary Linking Words
acquired
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acquisition
cost
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costs
was
decreased sharply in comparison between before and after moving to developing countries.
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apply
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may not pose imminent drawbacks, but in the long Use synonyms
term
it will Add a comma
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make
negative effects on Verb problem
have
environment
and chronic health diseases. Add an article
the environment
This
negative impact stems from burning fossil fuels during manufacturing processes, which release directly into Linking Words
atmosphere
without any treatment effects on Correct article usage
the atmosphere
air
surrounding Correct article usage
the air
condition
. The consequence of Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
this
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create
many Change the verb form
creates
sub consequences
for native persons and employees as inhale in Add a hyphen
sub-consequences
pollution
atmosphere with Replace the word
polluted
high density
particulate dust. Take, Add a hyphen
high-density
Samsung
employees as an example, which Use synonyms
underline
how much impact was created as Change the verb form
underlines
Samsung
operators have to compensate Use synonyms
to
reduced lung function Change preposition
for
in
after failure in legal court. Change preposition
apply
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, creating some minor drawbacks in Linking Words
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global Linking Words
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factories
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factory
process
, Use synonyms
but
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apply
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this
can be addressed these conundrums holistically by implication Correct pronoun usage
these
higher
and stricter Change preposition
of higher
environment
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environmental
standard
and Fix the agreement mistake
standards
also
narrowing financial punishment in order to break law action.
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this
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process
not only Use synonyms
bring
improve native living standard but Change the verb form
brings
also
increase surplus profit for Linking Words
multinational
corporation, despite minor drawbacks including reduced lung function and Add an article
a multinational
the multinational
high density
toxic gases in low atmosphere condition. Add a hyphen
high-density
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still
regarded as Add a missing verb
is still
overall
progress since these problems can potentially resolved holistically.Linking Words
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