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The charts compare the ratio of water usage for different objectives in six sites of the world.

The charts compare the ratio of water usage for different objectives in six sites of the world.
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The displays charts compare the ratio of water usage for different objectives in six sites of the world. The below information describes industrial
use
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, agricultural
use
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 and domestic
use
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. Ratio about different objectives in six sites of the world. In North
America
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 the highest was industrial
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with
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 45%, Agricultural
use
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is
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 39% and Domestic
use
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 is 13%, in South
America
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 the highest
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 agricultural
use
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with
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 71%,
industrial
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and industrial
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as well as
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 domestic
use
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 is 19%. In Europe the highest is industrial
use
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 with 53%, agricultural
use
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 is 32% and domestic
use
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 is 15%. In Africa 84% is agricultural
use
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, 7% is domestic
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 and 9% is industrial
use
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. In Central
Asia
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 88% is agricultural
use
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, 6% is
industrail
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industrial
use
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 and 7% is domestic
use
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. In South East
Asia
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 81% is agricultural
use
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, 12% is industrial
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 and 7% is domestic
use
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, the above information describes about 3 sector
use
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 and 6 sites of the world they are North
America
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, South
America
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, Europe, Africa, Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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.
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