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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, liesure and work activities. What extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent years, technological advancements have changed our daily
life
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 as they are present in every
aspects
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 of living. In
this
 essay, I will illustrate the advantages and disadvantages of
this
 phenomenon and delineate that IT developments have more benefits for us. Information technology has numerous advantages for us.
For instance
, it enhances productivity
while
 it helps us to save a lot of time. Machines are faster than
the
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human
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 in terms of functioning
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 and complex tasks.
As a result
, computers can perform various activities more efficiently and swiftly compared to
the
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people.
For instance
, in
aviation
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 system,
due to
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the high-risk
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high-risk
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 of collision, it is crucial that all
airplanes
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 have a
specifice
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specific
 direction.
Thus
, aviation operators and pilots use
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 systems to navigate the route without undesired
accident
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.
On the other hand
, these advancements bring some concern regarding unemployment and safety. People are constantly frustrated over their
job
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 as these machines are taking their place. More
importanly
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importantly
, the safety issue makes people to not trust on computers
complately
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completely
. For
isntance
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instance
, driverless cars are widespread in America and several
comunities
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communities
 including drivers and passengers spoke about their concern over these vehicles. It has been reported that these cars caused multiple accidents in the
strees
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streets
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stress
 because of their weak
concious
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consciousness
 about
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surrounding
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. In conclusion, IT has brought higher productivity in a shorter time for us.
Although
, there are
worring
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worrying
 risks regarding its usage, its
develompents
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developments
development
 in the future will mitigate its drawbacks.
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