In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A debate over whether the change in family structure and family roles has a positive impact or a negative impact has long been a subject of discussion. Some
people
believe that the changes
occurred
in family structures gave them freedom and privacy but Correct pronoun usage
that occurred
on the other hand
, some people
think that these changes
left an individual alone.
To begin
with, family structure plays a vital role in the grooming of kids as well as
the young generation. At first,
people
used to live in a joint family where all the brothers and sisters used to live in the same house with their parents. Parents were the head of the family and had the authority to keep a check on everyone. Every decision is taken by the head of the family after discussing it with everyone and whenever an individual get
stuck in a problem, all the other members of the family try to help him/her. Change the verb form
gets
For instance
, if an individual gets some mental illness like depression or anxiety, other members would help that person by giving a friendly company and other kind of help if needed.
Furthermore
, people
are now preferring neutral families
in which they only live with their life partner. In neutral families
, there is no head of the family. Therefore
, there is no one to keep check
. The kids in neutral Change preposition
in check
families
do not realize the value of the joint families
. Therefore
, they lack certain kinds of grooming. For example
, today's kids did
not enjoy the company of grandparents and they lack their love and affection.
In short, Wrong verb form
do
changes
in family structures affect people
in a negative way. These changes
will completely isolate individuals in their own life and the new generation will lack the emotional connections of family. Although
there are certain people
who are happy in neutral families
and do not want to live in a joint family.Submitted by khannaughty26 on
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task response
The essay addresses the prompt but lacks depth in the discussion of the positive and negative impacts of the changes in family structure and roles. More detailed analysis and examples are needed to fully address the question.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure and introduction/conclusion are present, but the essay lacks clear development in supporting the main points. The coherence could be improved through better organization of ideas and clearer transitions between paragraphs.
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