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Plastic bags, bottles, and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to slove this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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Global warming is the biggest problem that everyone in the world is facing right now. It is caused by many factors and one of the main factors is
plastic
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. There should be
somethings
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some things
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 we can do in order to reduce
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 problem.
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 essay is going to discuss the effects and what way outs that the government and everybody can do. Talking about what
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 could damage the environment.
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, it comes from many chemicals and some of them can contaminate our
food
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.
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,
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Microplastic
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plastic
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, the smallest unit of it, can stay in plants that would be our
food
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 or animal’s
food
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.
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, it has
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 a very long lifetime,
may be
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 a decade, so the more you use it carelessly, the more waste you create. We should get rid of them from the nature. The first thing we can do is carefully
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 it.
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, you have to think a lot
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about what
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 you can do with them before tossing them
to
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into
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 the bin since
it
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they
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 will stay with
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you
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 for a long time. For the bigger view, the government should launch some campaigns
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 as ‘Say no to
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’ to encourage people to stop using unnecessary
plastic
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 material.
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‘No
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the ‘No
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plastic bag
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Plastic Bag
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’ event
enforces
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forces
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supermarket
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supermarkets
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 to add up more
price
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prices
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 if customers want to use
plastic
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bag
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bags
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 for their groceries. In summary,
plastic
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 could harm
environment
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the environment
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 since it can contaminate
in
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apply
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our
food
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 and has
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long
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a long
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 lifetime before it decays from our world. So, to decrease these problems, we should think carefully before using them and the country should launch events to encourage people
stop
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 using
it
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them
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.
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