Some people buy their children whatever they ask for and allow their children to do whatever they want to do. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences do this style of parenting have for children as they grow older?
Nowadays most
of
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apply
the
people Correct article usage
apply
prefer
live alone or with their partners rather than create a family. Add the particle
toprefer
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their beliefs, is easier Linking Words
grow
an animal Fix the infinitive
to grow
such
as a dog Linking Words
instead
of Linking Words
raise
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raising
a
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a child
children
children
. In fact, Use synonyms
have
offspring means not only Wrong verb form
having
spend
a lot of money for education or for everything that they need, but Wrong verb form
spending
also
it means Linking Words
have
time to grow them in the Wrong verb form
having
better
way ever. 80
Unlike the against considerations, I strongly support Correct word choice
best
that is
necessary to have enough time to spend and maybe waste for your Linking Words
children
if you want to raise them. To illustrate, nowadays, most Use synonyms
of
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apply
the
young people do not want to study and build Correct article usage
apply
a
own future based on culture and education, but they prefer to become an "Change the word
their
influencer
", who are teenagers that live creating and doing videos to upload on various applications in the Fix the agreement mistake
influencers
smarthphone
. Correct your spelling
smartphone
Therefore
, every Linking Words
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children
always Change to a singular noun
child
need
all the clothes, shoes and games that the others have to become an influencer and Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
based
their life to have more followers than the others. So, nowadays, is easier buy to our Wrong verb form
base
children
whatever they ask Use synonyms
instead
of Linking Words
make
them feel at a lower Wrong verb form
making
lever
than the other people that they watch on Correct your spelling
level
the
smartphones. 208
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their
To conclude
, in my opinion, Linking Words
allow
Wrong verb form
allowing
children
to buy everything that they want is not a good way to raise them, because they have to learn that, Use synonyms
fist
of all, is difficult Correct your spelling
first
earn
money and, second of all, Fix the infinitive
to earn
this
type of style of parenting will have bad consequences when they grow older Linking Words
such
as waste money in Linking Words
un useful
stuff.Correct your spelling
unuseful
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