The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.
The given line graph compares the proportion of
people
owning a car
in Britain during the 36-year period between 1971 and 2007.
Overall
, it can be seen that the percentage of households who had cars
soared gradually. Supplementary, the figure for individuals with one car
remained unchanged, whereas
the number of people
without a car
plunged during the given period of time.
For the first 4 years, people
with three or more cars
maintain
the same level, Wrong verb form
maintained
while
those who used two cars
rose to 10%. In the following four years
the percentage of Add a comma
years,
people
who had 2 cars
remained unchanged. Similarly
, those people
used three or more cars
. The rest of the time witnessed a substantial growth in the figure of people
with 2 cars
to approximately 30%, whereas
households with three or more cars
increased slightly to 6%.
From 1971 to 2007, the number of people
who had one car
increased to nearly 45%. By contrast
, households with no car
experienced a substantial fall to 45%. For the next 32 years, the people
have only one car
after some fluctuation conserves the same percentage at about two-fifths, however
, people
without cars
dropped by 25%.Submitted by kimiaakhyani67 on
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