Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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train
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society's
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railways
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roads
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almost
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are the best and safest
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destinations
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are safe for people and
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less than 20
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is less than twice
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year, and for mentioned
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governments should invest more
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upgrading
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and
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faculties. But
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other
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are slower,in some countries, and harder
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than
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connecting
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cars
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rather than
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you more
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governments
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on
roads
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rather than
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not safe enough as
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cause more time
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consumption
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because of petrol usage.
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are more safe and
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with the environment.
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and making a
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of
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and
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options
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are the best way for governments
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to make
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travellers happy.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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  • Regional development
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  • Flexibility
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  • Integration
  • Sustainable
  • Efficiency
  • Infrastructure
  • Commuters
  • Public expenditure
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  • Accessibility
  • Connectivity
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