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Many people fail to achieve a balance between work and the other parts of life. what causes the situation ? how to overcome this problem?

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In the modern era, most people cannot succeed between work and other parts of life . There are reasons for
this
 occasion and I will explain how to overcome
this
 problem. There are causes of the unbalanced between work and life .
firstly
 companies want employees to work and workers want to earn money so they make shifts.
Although
 we become consumer public day by day ,money is increasing the value.
This
 occasion breaks up the balance.
As a result
 ,the public likes to earn money but does not have free time for other life .
On the other hand
, there are measures we will find the balance companies make free places for the socialist of the workers,
for instance
, ping pong, basketball court may be and they are relaxed or employers should extend the holiday. they spend time with their family and friends in
this
 situation they see that family and friends are important in their lives. on the whole, if we want to find the balance. we can succeed
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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