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The given line chart provides information about how many shops that closed and opened in a country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, both closed shops and opened ones saw
upwards
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 trends with large
fluctuated
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. In 2011, the number of shop
closures
 was about 6500,
whereas
 that of
openings
 stood at roughly 8500. From
this
 year until 2012, those figures declined by just over 500 and 4500, respectively. Over the next 2 years, the figure for shop
openings
 increased moderately and
reach
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 just over 6000,
while
closures
 grew up to over 7000 in 2013
that
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 was its peak, after which it decreased by about 500. Between 2014 and 2015, shop
closures
 experienced a dramatic fall of 6000 which was its minimum amount and
openings
 decreased by 2000. After one year it increased again and reached 5000. In the subsequent years,
closures
 remained constant
in
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 5000 and
openings
 saw a slight fall of 1000 between 2017 and 2018.
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