"The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University.
The table illustrates survey results from McGill University, covering five key indicators over a five-year span from 2005 to 2015.
Overall
, library
resources received the highest ratings, whereas
the university's offerings in terms of module diversity received the lowest scores. Nevertheless
, toward the end of the period
, student services superseded library
resources to claim the top spot.
In 2005, library
references garnered a rating of 86, a figure that remained consistent at 88 in 2010 and 87 in 2015. In stark contrast, student services earned a modest rating of 54 in 2005 but underwent a remarkable surge, almost doubling by the conclusion of the period
and surpassing library
resources, reaching a peak of 95.
Furthermore
, the array of modules provided by the university exhibited a consistent downward trajectory, plummeting from 39 at the commencement of the period
to a mere 25 by its conclusion. This
category exhibited a steady decline, reaching its nadir in 2015 with a rating of just 25. On the contrary
, ratings for sports and social facilities remained unwavering throughout the entire five-year period
, consistently holding at 65Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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