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ome People claims that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. to what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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It is of concern that domestic
waste
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 not sufficiently recycled.
People
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 suggest to achieve satisfactory recycling, lawmakers should legalize it. I am of the view that laws are required to achieve
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. On the one hand, we generate rubbish in our homes on a daily basis which we dispose of.
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, it is known that not all
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 materials can be reused.
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, the dust bins that we dump rubbish in could be labelled as recyclable and non-recyclable
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.
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 will make it easier for most households to appropriately segregate the rubbish and
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 partake in the recycling process.
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,
people
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 can be offered rewards for some kilograms of recyclable items disposed of. Receiving a price for
waste
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 products is likely to encourage
people
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 to be diligent in throwing out recyclable items which eventually will lead to a clean home.
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, laws by authorities are likely to be taken seriously by the citizens.
People
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 will have a sense of responsibility to partake in the reusing and repackaging of materials if they know not doing so will violate a law.
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, it is obvious societal laws will go a long way to help with domestic
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 recycling and I agree with
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