Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this ? Is this a positive or a negative development ?
It is argued that these days,
parents
put unacceptable pressure on their children
to make sure that they will reach success in the near future
. This
essay will discuss the reasons for this
issue and explain whether it is a positive or negative trend.
To begin
with, nowadays it seems that parents
pay a lot of attention to their children
's future
and their way to achieving success because of two main reasons. Firstly
, Due to
the economic changes that have been happening around the world, it seems that the way of reaching a secure future
is becoming more and more difficult. As a result
, parents
usually argue that their children
should make more effort for achieving to a successful life. Also
, the second reason is that they want their children
to make all of their goals, which they failed to reach, into reality. For example
, many parents
were not able to study at universities and because of that they really wish that their children
can have studies in there.
The effect of this
point of view and behaviour, in my opinion, can have a very dangerous impact on the young generation. Firstly
and mostly, putting a lot of pressure on children
may cause them to lose their interest in success. For example
, one of the negative impact
of these kinds of behaviour is that the Change to a plural noun
impacts
children
may lose all of their childhood hobbies and in the future
they will feel Add a comma
future,
badly
about that.
In conclusion, Replace the adverb
bad
due to
the reasons mentioned above, I believe that putting a lot of pressure on the young generation by their parent is an evident negative development and has a huge number of destructive effects on their children
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