A zoo has no usful purpose Do yo agree or disagree with the following statement.

Animal habitats like

zoo

has been argued that it is not essential to humankind.

This

could be a waste of money and other resources.

This

essay will discuss why

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strongly

disgaree

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disagree

with the above notion and

ellaborates

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elaborates

elaborate

the

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reasons. To begin with, there are

number

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of animal species worldwide that lives in a

zoo

.

This

has become

their

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shelter that protects each one of them from any danger.

Moreover

,

animals

especially the endangered and wild ones can live freely and

this

is a tranquil

place

for them. In

order

to protect these

animals

they need to have their own space and

place

to live which is the

zoo

.

For instance

, there

are

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some animal specie that needs

specific

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place

to live and to have

somone

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someone

really to take care

for

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them, the

zoo

offers these amenities.

Secondly

, going to

such

places offers knowledge and wisdom to the people in knowing different

variety

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of

animals

globally. They may

be expose

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be exposed

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to how they live, eat, and survive just like humans.

Hence

,

this

will encourage a lot of visitors to be mindful

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our natural

resouces

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resources

in

order

to take care of these

animals

.

For example

, there are cities that require fees in

order

to see these kind of places

which

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these funds were used to maintain

the

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cleanliness and makes it a better

place

for different species.

In addition

, you can

also

experience going to the

zoo

to some other

placesfor

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places for

free as long as you abide

the

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rules set by the government.

To sum up

, I strongly disagree that

zoo

has no useful purpose given it protects varied wildlife

animals

and it

also

offers

wide

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range of knowledge to people about endangered species.

Furthermore

,

this

place

will

also

pomotes

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promotes

promote

cooperation and humanity to all to become

involve

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in protecting our environment in

order

to avoid losing them.