Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others belive that some imformation is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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There have been conflicting views about how should
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share
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information
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with each other in scientific research, business and the academic World.
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some
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say that it should be shared freely,
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others believe that some
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is too crucial and essential to be shared which I
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definitely agree with.
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essay will discuss both sides. Those who argue that it is good to
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knowledge or make
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transfers have innocent reasons to believe that. They believe knowledge can grow as much as they
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and
people
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need to reconnect, ignore their egos and
share
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more and more
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with each other for a greater future.
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,
last
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year in Holland, Peter Hawk , the biologist, released his mindblowing article related to protein synthesis in the lungs freely and it led to another research based on vaccination for lung cancer.
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, there are myriad
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who make their living with
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significant
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. On the other side of the argument, there are
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who say some of the
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that is
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too significant cannot be shared freely. Some scientists, businessmen or researchers strive and spend their whole lives to receive just one essential
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or create a new product with
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essential
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. They and I
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believe that they have a right to demand payment for all their efforts or just not
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any
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related to their work because they make money from
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key
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and make a living.
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, if one company makes all their data accessible, their competitors can learn their latest technology and make it.
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situation leads to making markets uncompetiable and causes companies to slowly collapse. In conclusion, should the important
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be shared freely?
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some believe all
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needs to be shared for the greater good, some and
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I believe some
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may be hidden or money may be demanded for their efforts to continue to make their living.
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