Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons?
Nowadays, there has been a major concern that many couples have delayed parenthood. A few reasons can be given to justify
this
trend. Firstly
, this
choice allows them to have more time to enjoy life when they are young. For instance
, it is easier for a young couple to travel when they do not have a baby to nurture. Secondly
, people who are at the early stage of their careers usually have lower incomes compared to when they are older. Therefore
, many people decide to start raising a family after having accumulated enough money to ensure a better life for their children. In conclusion, the tendency to have children at later ages is caused by a number of factors, and both the positive and negative impacts of it can be seen in families and society.Submitted by [email protected] on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite