Many people are moving from rural areas to big cities, why has this happened? To what extent do you think it is a good trend?

At present, a part of

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migrates from

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the countrysides

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to urban areas. They may believe that it is easier to find a job

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and live a more comfortable life in

cities

,

nevertheless

,

this

trend will bring a lot of problems. There are two main reasons why people choose to move their residence to

cities

. First of all, there is a relatively tense population in an urban area, which produces more

employment

opportunities, relatively speaking, it is easier to get a higher salary.

This

means increasing living standards, and more products are affordable.

By comparison

, there are few

employment

opportunities in rural areas,

due to

many imperfectly developed professions, and lower consumption power. Another reason is that urban residents are easier to obtain public services than rural dwellers, including education, health care and better living standards. Young parents hope their children can receive a better education in

cities

, thereby,

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away from poverty. The increasing

urban

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number of urban

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inhabitants will pose a stress on facilities and housing.

Since the

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lack of land makes it challenging for some

cities

to accommodate a large number of populations. Lots of migrants have to reside in slums eventually, and suffer harsh conditions,

as a result

of unaffordable houses. Diseases are more popular

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because urban facilities cannot meet the supply of clean water, household garbage disposal, sewage treatment and so on. One of the main problems of countryside transfer is that the income gap between urban and rural residents is widening, not narrowing. Ambitious, energetic, diligent and creative young men are willing to go to

cities

for studies and

employment

.

Thus

, the lack of labour force in rural areas makes it really difficult to revive the economy of

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.

On the contrary

, some of the youth in

cities

choose to commit crimes because of the wealth gap. In conclusion, poor

employment

prospects and economic backwardness of

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result in population migration. It is a worrying trend.