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Virtual reality used as a tool for theraphtic interventionand mental healty to what extend do you agree or disagree?

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These days, society who need a mental remedy have been receiving therapy through virtual existence and argue that it can help their mental health practically to sustain a normal life. I have a positive opinion and present my perspectives in
this
 essay.
To begin
 with, the majority of folk believe that
this
 is a good phenomenon to accept a number of the population who have to take a mental cure and alleviate family's eyes toward the population.
For example
, there is a social stigma in Korea toward psychiatric hospitals and people having mental diseases for some reason. The public
reluctant
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 to go there even public who have severe mental symptoms.
However
, we will be able to take an appropriate remedy by spreading
this
 virtual reality method because it will be generalization in the whole city.
As a result
, the civils will be provided a mental treatment without people's prejudging and can mitigate social stereotypes for a mental institution.
Additionally
, several experts say that the cost of getting a mental cure will decrease by increasing the number of ways virtual reality cures.
This
 is because taking a mental recovery means that most communities can afford
this
 price and the lower class will get a decent remedy at a reasonable price.
Consequently
, spreading a mental recovery with virtual reality has benefits in addressing the public's mental symptoms. In conclusion, I think that we should encourage the use of virtual existence for meeting people's calming emotions and give them chances to get a stable mind through comfortable cures regardless of online and face-to-face.
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