Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

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trend
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self-employed. The main reason for
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is people like to live
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. There are even
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of being self-employed. The main reason for
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case
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is that
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to be
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independent
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, is self-employed
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person
is free to do whatever she likes.
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among young being self
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have played
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great role in self-employed.
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person
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likes
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jobs
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fill free to do
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he or she like. Self-employed
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person
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can
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at any were
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. It has been noticed that
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self-employed people
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more
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to working in
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company
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a company
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or
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. There
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many
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advantages
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self-employed
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. The government should encourage self-employed
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because it has so many advantages. As every coin
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two sides in
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ways
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self-employed have
also
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adavnatage
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advantage
advantages
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disadvatge
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disadvantage
disadvantages
. There are so many
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for
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like investment and much more. Working in
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organisation
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help
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a
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in
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grow
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skills.
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self-employed
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the self-employed
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job
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a
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have
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to do all kind of
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by herself. In a
company
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work
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a
person
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make
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so many
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by which he or she
get
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a
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great knowledge from it. The government should spread awareness about working in
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organisation
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as well as
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a
company
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. Self-employed
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affect
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in unemployment
also
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.
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Company
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Companies
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should pay more to the
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working in
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company
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the company
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or
organisation
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.
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, the are so many
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for
self-employed
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the self-employed
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case
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. There are even
disadvantge
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disadvantage
disadvantages
of being self-employed. Even there are some
advanatge
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advantages
advantage
for
this
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case
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employment
  • freelancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • autonomy
  • financial stability
  • work-life balance
  • financial insecurity
  • lack of support
  • resources
  • long working hours
  • uncertain income
  • job security
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