In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities , so the population in the countriyside is decreasing do you think this is a positive or negative development

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Nowayadys

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moving from rural areas to

cities

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has become omnipresent almost everywhere.

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less

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people

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live in

countryside

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the countryside

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consider

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issue as a negative development both for

people

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and

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and support my statement

furthure

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further

. To start with, migration from

less- developed

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less-developed

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places to

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causes many

diffrenet

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different

problems. To name

afew

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a few

, urban places usually design for

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amount of citizens.

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, roads and public facilities can not bear

incremental

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rate of rural

pupulation

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population

adding to

cities

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excessively.

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government devotes more money

for

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revitalisation and renovation. Another issue

steems

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stems

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from

increasing

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rate of

exhusted

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exhausted

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fumes from cars and maybe public transportation facilities. To clarify, when rural

people

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departure

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to capital

cities

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, they usually look for better job opportunities and have to commute to work

everyday

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which

result

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results

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in air pollution.

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countryside's

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the countryside's

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unique nature

is remain

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remains

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inact

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intact

, planners need to expand parks and natural spaces in downtowns to tackle

aforementioned

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the aforementioned

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problem. On the other side, it is not just nature that

endevour

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endeavour

negative repercussions of moving from

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the countrysides

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countrysides

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countryside

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. Original

habitant

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habitants

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are prone to face challenges as well.

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, rural

people

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usually work for less amount of money and

this

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look

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looks

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enticing for managers.

overall

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, they can easily take

citicen's

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citizen's

citizens

job opportunities.

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, more

residental

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residential

area

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areas

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are needed when moving to

cities

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concerns. To clarify, city expansion

accelate

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accelerate

accelerated

exponantially

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exponentially

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, deforestation and water scarcity will increase. In a nutshell, both

citicens

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cities

and

natural

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the natural

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environment suffer from

increasing

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an increasing

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rate of rural

people

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. Capital

cities

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encounter traffic congestion and air pollution problems, on the other side,

citicens

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cities

are more likely to lose their job opportunities.

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