You play sports (e.g. football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in a hospital. Write a let to your teammate. In your letter say how you feel about the news ask about the treatment in the hospital suggest some ways of cheering him/her up

Dear Navan, I hope you are feeling better now. I'm so sorry to know that you were hospitalized yesterday

due to

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a minor injury to your left foot. Yesterday evening, after a few attempts to call you, I dialled your father's number to confirm the schedule for the upcoming tournament at K.V.C stadium. I got to know that you hurt your left foot

while

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playing with your younger daughter. I'm more concerned about it because we have a tournament in a few days, and you are the backbone of our volleyball team. Are you on any painkillers now or doctors are giving you any special kind of therapies to deal with

this

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situation? Anyway, it's a minor injury as per my discussion with your dad.

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, he told me that your doctor will discharge you tomorrow morning and you are fit to play as per your father's conversation with the hospital staff. I'm extremely excited to see you on the volleyball playground. Get well soon! Sandy

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

166 words

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The Closing

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