You play sports (e.g. football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in a hospital. Write a let to your teammate. In your letter say how you feel about the news ask about the treatment in the hospital suggest some ways of cheering him/her up

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Dear Navan, I hope you are feeling better now. I'm so sorry to know that you were hospitalized yesterday

due to

a minor injury to your left foot. Yesterday evening, after a few attempts to call you, I dialled your father's number to confirm the schedule for the upcoming tournament at K.V.C stadium. I got to know that you hurt your left foot

while

playing with your younger daughter. I'm more concerned about it because we have a tournament in a few days, and you are the backbone of our volleyball team. Are you on any painkillers now or doctors are giving you any special kind of therapies to deal with

this

situation? Anyway, it's a minor injury as per my discussion with your dad.

Moreover

, he told me that your doctor will discharge you tomorrow morning and you are fit to play as per your father's conversation with the hospital staff. I'm extremely excited to see you on the volleyball playground. Get well soon! Sandy

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The Closing

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Varied vocabulary

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You play sports (e.g. football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in a hospital. Write a let to your teammate. In your letter say how you feel about the news ask about the treatment in the hospital suggest some ways of cheering him/her up

The Closing

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There were advantages and disadvantages of living in small towns.

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbor to come

Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometime starting until the age of five or six, right up until the age of eighteen. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making childern do exams?

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society.Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.