The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The given pie charts depict the average number of
energy
used by Australian
households and the greenhouse gas emissions resulting from energy
use
.
Overall
, heating made up as the biggest contributor to energy
use
, while
water heating constitutes the greenhouse gas emissions biggest proportion among Australian
households.
Starting with the first pie chart explains the data on Australian
households using energy
. Heating was in the first position of contributor at 42%, followed by Water heating at third-tenths. The proportion of other appliances stood as the third contributor to energy
use
at 15%. Then
, refrigeration and lighting contribute 7% and 4%, respectively. In addition
, cooling only contributes a tiny fraction.
Moving on to the second pie chart, water heating stood as the biggest proportion of greenhouse gas emissions at 32%. Moreover
, other appliances contribute roughly a quarter. Next,
heating and refrigeration constitute similar percentages at 15% and 14%, respectively. Additionally
, lighting made up 8%, while
cooling same as the Australian
households’ energy
use
contributing only 3%.Submitted by zakiyaartanti19 on
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