The chart below show the proportion of businesses making e commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015and 2019
The chart above depicts
information
about the proportion of e-commerce business purchases in 5 periods between 2015 and 2019 in manufacturing, construction,wholesale, retail and information
and communication.
Overall
, all the directions if
businesses in e-commerce are increasing Correct your spelling
of
year
by year
. Construction and wholesales
have the same Fix the agreement mistake
wholesale
statistic
of Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
raising
and almost the same results. Correct your spelling
rising
Moreover
, wholesales, information
and communications have the biggest proportion of sales in
the end of Change the preposition
at
last
period.
Correct article usage
the last
To begin
with, manufactures
and Replace the word
manufacturers
retails
had 30% of sales in 2015 and both rapidly increased to 50% in the next Correct subject-verb agreement
retail
year
, however
manufactures
decreased in the next Replace the word
manufacturing
year
and raised step by step to 60% in the last
period while
retails
stayed on the same point of 50-55% in the next 3 periods.
Correct subject-verb agreement
retail
On the other hand
, whole sales
and construction increased gradually, Correct your spelling
wholesales
year
by year
increasing by 10-15%. Also
, they peaked their
highest point in 2019, 62% and 57% respectively. Since Change preposition
at their
measurement
the most popular and biggest proportion have Add a comma
,measurement
information
and communication. In the beginning, having the number of 60% it peaked 75
% in 2018.Change preposition
at 75
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words information, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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