The maps bellow show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now , and plans for its development.
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centre
of Use synonyms
small
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a small
town
called Use synonyms
Islip
as it Use synonyms
now
, and plans for its development.
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is now
Islip
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town
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centre
now, in the north Use synonyms
side
there is countryside, some shops Use synonyms
as well as
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main
road. Add an article
the main
a main
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the east Change preposition
On
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side
there is a park. Add a comma
,side
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the south Change preposition
On
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side
there is housing and Add a comma
,side
in
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on
west-south
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the west-south
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side
there is a school. Add a comma
,side
However
, in Linking Words
Islip
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town
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centre
: planned development, Use synonyms
in
the west Change preposition
on
side
there is Use synonyms
dual
carriageway. Correct article usage
a dual
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the south Change preposition
On
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side
there is a school Add a comma
,side
as well as
housing as it is in Linking Words
Islip
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town
now. There Use synonyms
are
some new housing. In the Correct subject-verb agreement
is
centre
there Use synonyms
is
shops. There is Change the verb form
are
an
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a
pedestrians
only in between Change the noun form
pedestrian
shopping
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the shopping
centre
and shops. There is new housing Use synonyms
in
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on
north-east
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the north-east
side
. There Use synonyms
even
a small car park near to bus station. The major change is in housing.
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is even
To conclude
, there is Linking Words
great
difference Add an article
a great
in
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between
Islip
small Use synonyms
town
and plans for its development.Use synonyms
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