The maps bellow show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now , and plans for its development.
The display maps show the
centre
of small
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a small
town
called Islip
as it now
, and plans for its development.
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is now
Islip
town
centre
now, in the north side
there is countryside, some shops as well as
main
road. Add an article
the main
a main
In
the east Change preposition
On
side
there is a park. Add a comma
,side
In
the south Change preposition
On
side
there is housing and Add a comma
,side
in
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on
west-south
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the west-south
side
there is a school. Add a comma
,side
However
, in Islip
town
centre
: planned development, in
the west Change preposition
on
side
there is dual
carriageway. Correct article usage
a dual
In
the south Change preposition
On
side
there is a school Add a comma
,side
as well as
housing as it is in Islip
town
now. There are
some new housing. In the Correct subject-verb agreement
is
centre
there is
shops. There is Change the verb form
are
an
Change the article
a
pedestrians
only in between Change the noun form
pedestrian
shopping
Correct article usage
the shopping
centre
and shops. There is new housing in
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on
north-east
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the north-east
side
. There even
a small car park near to bus station. The major change is in housing.
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is even
To conclude
, there is great
difference Add an article
a great
in
Change preposition
between
Islip
small town
and plans for its development.Submitted by purvaam383 on
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