You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter •correct the information in the article •explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in order to complain about an article I read in your
which has incorrect
To begin
with, as far as the incorrect
is concerned, I would like to correct the
about the smoking pipe
due to
that It is wrong. In
, the
real world
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capital of pipe for smoking is Saint Claude in France
of Pekin as you mentioned.
In addition
, It is important for your
to give correct
due to
that readers follow your advice, leading to the
that you need to be professional and accurate.
For example
, If you publish that the Eiffel Tower is in Sydney, people
do not will
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trust your
but not least, I would like to suggest to the editor to rectify the
in the
. On account of that mistake, I would like to request to make a reportage of the real capital resulting to bring more tourism. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any
. Kind regards, Mr Van
Submitted by tony.vantroo on

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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