Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
Everyone is eligible for
accessing
to Change the form of the verb
access
university
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education
regardless of their financial Use synonyms
backgrounds
. Fix the agreement mistake
background
However
, Linking Words
it
is not the case in some parts of the world and I strongly believe that the Correct pronoun usage
this
government
should take action to help knowledge in Use synonyms
Use synonyms
university
available Fix the agreement mistake
universities
for
every Change preposition
to
student
.
First of all, it is undeniable that Use synonyms
people
must have a chance to get higher Use synonyms
education
when they are qualified to all standard criteria of the Use synonyms
university
. But Use synonyms
this
is not the case in some countries Linking Words
when
higher Correct word choice
where
education
becomes the dream in their heads because of high tuition Use synonyms
Use synonyms
fee
or Fix the agreement mistake
fees
student
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loans
. In fact, some private or Use synonyms
pretigous
universities require a criminally expensive Correct your spelling
prestigious
fee
that Use synonyms
excess
the Replace the word
exceeds
afforability
of the majority of Correct your spelling
affordability
students
. Top schools of Ivy League, a Use synonyms
quintesstial
example, have a skyrocket Correct your spelling
quintessential
fee
for the qualified program, Use synonyms
not to mention
their rigorous criteria for Linking Words
students
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, it seems that Linking Words
student
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loans
are a valid concern among Use synonyms
people
when they graduate. The situation Use synonyms
worsen
when the Change the verb form
worsens
economics
is in its down times, which means that the Replace the word
economy
labor
market is dynamic Change the spelling
labour
along with
an Linking Words
increasingly
unemployment rate. Change the adverb
increasing
Therefore
, the situation of graduates struggling to pay their bills not just Linking Words
student
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loans
makes Use synonyms
people
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be
afraid of getting higher Unnecessary verb
apply
education
.
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However
, I firmly believe that the Linking Words
government
can better the situation by supporting Use synonyms
students
financially. Use synonyms
Firstly
, in terms of tuition Linking Words
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fee
, they can organize Fix the agreement mistake
fees
full-scholarships
programs for Correct your spelling
full-scholarship
students
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in
all walks of life. Change preposition
from
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, they can Linking Words
also
raise Linking Words
fund
from businesses and organizations outside, which makes the scholarships available for almost Fix the agreement mistake
funds
residents
. Correct determiner usage
all residents
Secondly
, in terms of Linking Words
student
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loans
, the proposals Use synonyms
of cutting
off Change preposition
to cut
student
Use synonyms
loans
should be accepted by the Use synonyms
government
. In doing so, they can alleviate pressure Use synonyms
mong
undergraduates and help more Correct your spelling
among
people
access Use synonyms
to
the Change preposition
apply
university
.
Use synonyms
Bottom
line, Correct article usage
The bottom
university
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education
is obviously available for all Use synonyms
people
and the Use synonyms
government
can help accessibility spread to the residents by funding scholarships and cutting Use synonyms
of
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apply
student
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loans
.Use synonyms
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