In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

My name is Basil Turkin and I have decided with my family to move from Toronto to your town.
decision was forced by my recent promotion
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I could not decline.
, I have two children and I want to know about the possibility of studying in your school. My son is in the
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grade and I have heard that
school is the best in town. He is a bright boy but he has a problem with
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math. Despite
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, he has a high score
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the other subjects and
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interested in music. I hope that your educational style
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fit him the best and
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that he
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will be able to achieve the best results.
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, I hope that you will do everything to make his appearance in the class as smooth as possible. If you require any additional information, let me know. Yours faithfully, Basil Turkin
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