The table shows the number of overseas visits to the UK by country of residence and mode of travel in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feayures, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
chart illustrates the way
of travel and the amount of foreign visits
to the UK in 2011 and 2013.
Overall
, most of the countries' way
of visits
to UK
which Correct article usage
the UK
include
the Correct subject-verb agreement
includes
air
and tunnel
increased in two years, except for Portugal in air
and Italy and Sweden in tunnel
. In addition
, the
Italy and France had the highest increase in Correct article usage
apply
air
and tunnel
respectively.
Even though all the nations increased foreign visits
in two years, the
Portugal, Italy and Sweden still Correct article usage
apply
drop
in 2013. Wrong verb form
dropped
Firstly
, in
the Change preposition
apply
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
visits
by air
Correct your spelling
airway
way
was 260,000 in 2011 in
Portugal, Change preposition
apply
however
, it dropped to 251,000 in 2013. Furthermore
, in
the Change preposition
apply
way
of visits
by tunnel
in Italy dropped from 24,000 to 23,000, and Sweden Add an article
a tunnel
the tunnel
had
Unnecessary verb
apply
a
dramatically dropped from 19,000 to 3,000.
Correct article usage
apply
Comparing
with other nations, Italy and France had the most obvious increase. In Italy, it had a 117,000 Wrong verb form
Compared
visits
increase in air
Correct your spelling
airway
way
visits
, which surged from 1,445,000 to 1,562,000 visits
in two years. In France, the foreign visits
from tunnel
increased from 1,514,000 to 1,761,000 between 2011 to 2013.Correct article usage
the tunnel
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