People are becoming famous with the help of TV programmes and the internet. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
Nowadays, a huge number of
people
are well-known for attending TV
programmes or being an influencer on social media
. Although
it is a more convenient way of making money for individuals, they can have a negative impact on their followers especially the younger ones who can be affected by them more.
On the one hand, in today's world and with the advances in technology, talented ones can find their place in society way faster than before when they had to try extremely hard to be famous. By expanding the number of TV
channels resulting in more TV
shows for everyone's taste, more people
are involved and can be popular in the world. Moreover
, they can demonstrate their abilities and also
teach them to others online and have a considerable income out of that. For instance
, a huge number of channels upload educating content on social media
like YouTube resulting in improving the average knowledge of society.
On the other hand
, there is no control over social media
and everyone can share their ideas which might have a negative effect on the community. Comparing to the past, people
who had taught in art schools were the ones on TV
and they were aware of their influence on society while
nowadays everyone without any further
education can impact people
's minds. For example
, Instagram is filled with inappropriate media
for kids such
as extreme focus on fashion which can prevent them from studying and educating well.
To conclude
, becoming famous via social media
and TV
and making a profit from them is a great advantage for this
generation however
, some individuals who are not taught to act appropriately can overuse this
merit and have a destructive effect on their followers' lives.Submitted by parham.moonesi on
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