the world would be a much poorer place without colour. To what extent you agree or disagree

Colours
are the greatest blessings, that God bestowed upon the
people
in the
world
. Have anyone has imagined
about
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a
world
which has no
colour
in it
.
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I truly feel that the concept of a
world
without
colour
is absolutely difficult even to imagine. The impact of
colour
in our
life
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is widely spread and
well visible
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in every corner of the
world
. Humankind
are
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deeply connected with various
colours
from the very early stage of community life, especially with the celebration of special events and
also
during the occasion of different types of significant functions.
For example
,
people
used to wear white
colour
clothes
while
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wedding ceremonies
where
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as in
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funeral
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with black
colour
dresses.
Thus
it is obvious that
people
are curious and interested
about
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the attributes of
colours
.
Furthermore
, nature
are
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enriched with various
colours
and mankind distinguishes
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and quality of fruits with their
colours
as well as
with
the
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smell. Because of the
colour
people
can identify the taste and names of each
fruits
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as there are several fruits
are
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available in
the
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nature and most of them
are varies
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from continent to continent.
For instance
,
orange
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colour
help
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us to determine the orange fruit, like
wise
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apple
also
with its lovely red
colour
.
In addition
to that,
colour
make
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us happy with its presence
itself
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. The
colour
of
rainbow
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and blood coloured
sun set
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always fill our hearts with pleasure, often with the picturesque view. To put it in a nutshell, it is undoubtedly
through
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that without
colour
world
will
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be
much
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poorer
places
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. I opine that
,
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it will be impossible to imagine a
world
without
the
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beautiful
colours
as
by
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seeing several
colours
of nature brings happiness to humanity
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