Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should: tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inform

reagarding

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regarding

the damaged

road

in front of our house. My name is Jashan

deep

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Kaur. I have been residing in

the

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Norva Street

from

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for

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almost three years.

This

locality is under your authority now. Since

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my family

have shifted

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moved

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here we

are

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facing many problems because of

this

damaged

road

Whenver

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Whenever

there is rain, the

road

fulls

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is fulls

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with

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water and

cause

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causes

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difficulty for the vehicles to move and

this

causes huge traffic. Resultingly,it created

diffculity

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difficulty

for my family to go outside

from

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our house.

Apart from

this

, it creates tension among

pedestrains

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pedestrians

who travel daily through

this

route

beacuse

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because

of the digs and rocks on the

road

. Not only me but from our locality there are many people who have

complaint

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about it to the previous party but no action had been taken by them. I would request you to please visit

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our locality at once and have a look at

road

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the road

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by yourself.So, quick actions can

taken

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be taken

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against

this

serious problem. Looking forward to

hear

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hearing

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from you

back

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. Yours Faithfully, Jashan

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

180 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Grievance
Deterioration
Hazardous
Impede
Inconvenience
Potholes
Cracks
Collapsed
Uneven
Detour
Repair
Maintenance
Investigation
Infrastructure
Expenditure
Resolution
Improvement
Community
Resident
Safety
Convenience
Traffic congestion
Civic
Enquiry

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