Many family moves to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this, while others consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In

this

contemporary epoch, the idea of immigration to different nations has been gaining ground recently.

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Whilst

proponents hold the view that

this

move could have a positive impact on

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, opponents have a diverse perspective. I am of the belief that exposing youngsters to different cultures may enrich their interpersonal skills. On the one hand, despite agreeing that emigration to richer

countries

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merits

, many think that

this

phenomenon could harm current generations.

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immature child

enrolls

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in a new school in a new country, he may suffer from

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cultural differences and

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culture shock, and

this

could lead him to be isolated. A prime example of

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podcast, which was broadcast on the BBC,

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that many students experience depression

due to

immigration to foreign

countries

.

Hence

, what can be said is that not only could living in a foreign nation have a

detremental

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detrimental

influence on children's psychological health, but it could

also

negatively affect their academic performance.

On the other hand

, residing in a different country might improve adolescents' communication skills, and help them acquire different information about different cultures. To explain, if families expose their offspring to different

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,

this

will help them enhance their personality and

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assist

them in language

acquistion

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acquisition

as well.

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, many

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Egyptian

families strive to dwell in

western

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countries

to secure a fulfilling future

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their younger ones.

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this

inspiring step, a myriad of pupils all over the world would not be allowed to have a promising

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future

. In conclusion,

after

this

essay has manifested the points mentioned above, it can be reiterated that even though many parents believe that travelling and living in foreign

countries

is risky, I am convinced that families should permit their kids to have

this

experience because it could aid in broadening their horizons.